Saturday, Jun. 30th at 12:23pm
wouldn't really consider "heartless" as metal but more mainstream...like a nickle back or something...no offense intended...they made millions of dollars lol...."kicking a dead horse" with the name i was expecting more to be honest....lead in seemed to take to long with not much change in melody.....to be honest I couldn't really tell when the song actually started to vibe unless it was around the 1:00 min mark.....vocals made it A LOT better...voice matched the melody...prolly should've started lyrics a lil earlier in the song. just my opinion....just honest criticism "I killed my friend" your lyrics were confusing to me on this one first verse....hook is catchy....voice matches melody well....second verse followed more of the storyline and was understandable...liked the lead into the diff melody in the middle....then you go into a totally diff direction with the story? sorry stopped listening at this point....just some honest criticism no hate at all....keep makin music you have talent.....
